Your story is just too great!
I can't wait for the next chapter release!
Keep up the good work!

Hell yeah. Asch shut the hell up and stop complaining. You could ahve exposed Luke but you choose not to, so live with it.
Luke I don't think you should forgive your party memebers so easily. Asch isn't the only one being a total **.

hah, nice bashing
heck, all teh others could still need soem bashing there so called moral superaity out of them.
go luke go

^-^ Actually the subbed are out on some websites! I've watched all episodes so far, they're really good! Great chapter!
You got Jade really in character. Good job, that's a hard thing for lots of people to do! Can't wait until next chapter

Nice new chapter. I love what Luke says at the end of the story. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Holy ** this is a good story! Keep going!

so continue
*ashe basher i am*

-grins- He can't even play patty cake with one of the patty cake dolls. MWAHA! Not so poor Sync. I don't like Sync much really. -hands over a soul consuming muffin- I know I saw a mistake or two or three back there but I really don't feel like going back and pointing them out. Sorry! Keep it up!

Aw..poor Sync! How is he ever to scratch his other elbow? xD Great chapter. Can't wait to see how the others are going to react to Luke's new form. I think, just an opinion, that Van might of had a bit more of a reaction when Tear was hurt but it's your story! ^-^

That was a very good fight scene. Sync and Van just got owned so bad, it was just one-sided. Anyway, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Okay, I apologize if this is the first time I actually ever reviewed the fic despite reading it from the begining till chapter 12. Nice to see less typos for this chapter. Loved chapter 12! I think people should do more gory-tastic chapters like this more often ^_^

Violence aside, the fic is also very good story-wise. Interesting plot. Looking forward to another great chapter.

Thanks for keeping Luke and Tear alive! ^_^

Keep Writing
Eucharion

Oh! great chapter! Sorry to hear about your grandmother! Hope she gets better soon! ^-^ And loved the chapter! more closeness between Tear and Luke! Can't wait until the next chapter with a fight scene!

one question...WHY DID YOU END IT THERE?!? that was so very evil! you must update...you must! otherwise i dotn know what i shall do with my life (probably read other fics but thats beside the point) I have fallen in love with this story! How you have them hating luke in the beginning(and pretty much throughout the entire story) is just wonderful. (not that hating luke is a good thing but you get the idea) I hope that you will update really really really soon cause i wanna read more!

I loved the scenes with Luke an tear. Anyways, good job so far. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Great story so far. I love how you don't have Luke being so spineless and completely accepting of some of the others scathing remarks. As far as your question Guy recieved the cursed slot seal the first time the group entered Cessadonia, after having Aston analyze the fon disk they acquired in Coral Castle. Which occured just before returning to Baticul, where the group was later sent to Akzeriuth. Ion removed the cursed slot seal in Grand Chokmah when they went to enquire about the status of St. Binah from Emperor Peony.