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Reviews for: Going Away
Mad Possum
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
Wow: that’s very Pratchettesque. I don’t suppose many people have thought about how Granny would allow herself to die; the idea of not giving other people the pleasure of knowing she’s dead is probably spot on!

I also liked the cameos of all the characters from the Witches’ past, and the subtle way you mentioned them instead of just listing names. Good stuff.
Ranuel
2008-10-04 . chapter 1
I love this. Everyone is perfectly in character and you capture the humor of the original very well.
Virtuella
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
It's a good story, and I like how you have woven in so many references to different Discwolrd stories. I have my doubts that Granny would talk quite so much, even after Nanny's death, but that is a question of interpretation. What I would definitely say, though, is that the prose could do with a bit of polishing. I don't just mean the typos, but also some of the expressions, which were a bit awkward, like "notice through their magic".
Most of all, though, well done for tackling Granny at all and doing it so convincingly.
Skykhanhunter
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
Good story, I assume it's a oneshot. I liked the number of other characters that appeared in the story as well. Good character development too, it was something I could really see Nanny doing.
Downsides, just watch out for typo's. We all make 'em, just make sure you read your own stuff to make sure you get all of them.

regards Skykhanhunter
keep writing
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