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TheWeird'n'Mindful
2009-09-12 . chapter 1
Nice! Loved Naruto's blabbering mind, and this perfect one-shot this turned out to be. Thanks for writing!
Hesunohana
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
so beautiful !
-Nightly Halo-
2009-01-10 . chapter 1
wow! Loved the writing style of this! :3
FallenPie
2008-12-18 . chapter 1
haha that was great!
Though that is quite the list - loved the part about the cat ^__^
Kaye
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
I loves it
it was the perfect fanfic
for the couple
Crazy PurpleSage
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
Oh, that was such a great ItaNaru. I love how Naruto was writing this letter to Itachi while he;s sleeping right next to him. Just the fact that Itachi is actually sleeping, and trusts Naruto is so perfect.
And I LOVED the last line. Itachi is so perfect. He just knew Naruto's worries, and then wrote the perfect explanation. >.< Great job! I loved reading that! ;D
Stoic-Genius
2008-10-04 . chapter 1
I am glad that you wrote this, its really well written and thought out. And the fact that its coming from Naruto's perspective is perfect. I like this a lot!
skyglazingMaro
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
aww the last sentce is so well timed
xthextellxtalexmassacrex
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
i absolutly loved it!
MysticFireBlood
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
It's good, but it could use some editing. Other than that it is good.
susana
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
That was so sweet. I loved it
Twisted Vixen
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
Oh wow, it was beautiful. I'm not sure how much more I can say than that. It was like you could feel Naruto's emotions as he wrote. And for a long time there, I thought while he was writing that Itachi must be dead and I was feeling all sad and melancholy. But then came the end and I was like "aw so sweet". The ending was perfect.
eye-of-demon-kitsune34
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
that was so cute. and is naruto breaking up with itachi?


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love kitsune
ps: i really liked it ^^
HmmYaoi
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
-huge grin- itanaru! :D i loved it so much it was very well though i find it funny that sasuke tried so many times. and it's funny that itachi is like perfect at everything when in reality he's not. He just did wat he did to survive *after massacre* and to hold the image of uchiha *before*

i can't see him yelling 'oh kitty get here i have milk.' it was funny

also y u embarassed?
Pahoyhoy
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
How cute! Wait a story about Itachi cute...I think I might have just gotten hit by a car.
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