 remuslives23 2008-09-27 . chapter 1Interesting take on the relationship between the boys. I quite liked it and as always, it was wonderfully written. I liked this in particular...
"James could count on one hand everything he didn’t completely associate with Sirius - his broom, Lily, Bubbles (his secret stuff animal bear with a ripped ear) and Peter. All of these he held close to his heart. They were all his, and he would never share them with anyone else. He appreciated what they brought to his life, what excitement, acceptance and general comfort they gave him. He knew how to work each one, how to get a rise from them, how to make them want him."
A very calculating James is different to the easy going, affiable one we usually see and I liked it. Well done and beautifully written as usual. |
 Alaramine 2008-09-27 . chapter 1Whoah, I did not see Peter/James happening here. Its... interesting, in a good but different way.I do like the odd ships though, so I'll favorite it anyway. Is this a oneshot?
Cheers,
Alaramine |