Okay, i REALLY like this story. it was really well written and intense. very awsome; good job, think its going to my favorites list...

Wow, that was powerful. I loved how you just made Dee shut down & even Ryo couldn't make him snap out of it. This was a great fic to start my day off. Loved it.

This was amazing. What a trip, even though Dee went nowhere, that in itself was a journey. For Dee to totally shut down was quite impressive. Everything moving around him but not having exact details and everything being 'on mute' really made the fog of Dee's mind real. I enjoyed this quite a bit. I think you did exceptionally well.