I think it's great that you're doing a fic with Mrs. Gale in it; I believe it's the first I've read on . I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Also, I wonder if you would be interested in writing a Steed/Mrs. Gale romance :P Not necessarily added to this story, but perhaps a separate one?
~Koneka

Awesome chapter! But who are these men, what do they want?

Awesome new chapter :D

Awesome new chapter :D

Great story so far, please update soon!

This has promise, and you're obviously enjoying writing it, Philippa. I want to know what happens next!! My only constructive comment is a technical one and regards the structuring of your dialogue. It would be a little clearer to the reader if you used quotation marks around speech, and started a new line when each new character speaks. As it is at the moment, each speech runs into the next, often in the same paragraph, and thus it can be a little confusing as to who's speaking. Hope that helps, and you don't mind my pointing it out?? Apart from that - WELL DONE!! And KEEP WRITING!! :-)

Good start. I'm not familiar with the Gale era, but you've piqued my interest...

This ought to be fun, particularly if Cathy crosses paths with Steed and Emma. How will poor Steed cope? ;-)

Looking forward to seeing where this one goes. The most important rule in fanfic: have fun!