I loved it, thanks.

hey,
this will probably be pretty useless to you because constructive criticism is not really going to change a finished story but i thought i would write something anyway. i practically NEVER review so this means a lot :)
to tell you the truth, there really isn't anything to criticize :D i loved it !!
i already have some of you other stories favorited but this one is by far the best :)
really good job!!
so if i'm not constructively criticizing i at least bolstered you confidence :D
Happy Christmas!

Awsome job! I love this little story it's so sweet and perfect, nice writing!

I just came across this story and I must say it is bloody brilliant!
I have never laughed so much over a short story in my life!!
I would love to read anything else with Edward and Bella in it post BD, you really have a talent!!

Haha! That was NOT the ending that I was expecting! lol. Great job, though!:)

Thanks, now I have that song in my head. (8

Well written, only a couple typos. Thanks for sharing!

ha ha that was hilarious! I liked the end with Lauren! Poor Edward!! Great Job, I loved it :D

Oh my gosh! Please update! I'm looking every day for new chapters! I'ts like reading the book!
Please update or I'll die!
cheerfulladybug

ha ha! i love it!1

lol the ending was funny.

silly Nessie.

wow..


omg the end of the chapter! ah!

OMG! lol poor Bella.

lol Jake's face paleing.

ooh an agry Edward.

Oh gosh, i love it to bits, its soo funny, stupid mike tsk tsk tsk, Keep wrighting. Oh and is there any chance of a sequel, id love to hear about there life in juneau. Oh *Squeal*
I love it
Keep Wrighting (Again)
Shopaholic-ILoveTwilight

hahahahahahhaha i LOVE the ending. I was cracking up laughing!! wwell done. I love how this was written.

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