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Gladeshaddow 6/27/10 . chapter 1
This is amazing, full of laughs. I wish this was a real episode.
DeanFan 5/8/10 . chapter 1
Loved it. It was just like watching the show. I love Onslow. ALl he needs is his beer and bacon to be happy. LOL!
Lolly6 6/9/04 . chapter 1
Really great :) havne't giggled so much about a fic in ages! it sounds just like an episode same layout and everything well done :)!

I'm going to try and read some more of your fics now.

Lolly
Elisabet 4/5/04 . chapter 1
Totally great! I agree with those others who thought it was like watching an episode of the show, the characters were right, and you could picture everything there was happening very vividly. (sorry if I spell wrong - I'm danish!)
Celtic Cat 1/2/04 . chapter 1
I could see it all. You have those characters down cold. Very funny stuff.
Squall'sScar 4/6/03 . chapter 1
Hm...I read Keeping Up Good Neighbours before reading this. This wasn't as good as Good Neighbours, especially since the characters weren't in their correct personality. It was also a little more vulgar, but I prob. sound like Hyacinth! LOL!
Barbara 1/29/03 . chapter 1
I loved this story! It's as good as the episodes on TV! I could just picture this party!
eklektik 11/15/02 . chapter 1
Wonderful! Hilarious! The characterizations are right on! I enjoyed this story so much! Just one tiny quibble: What happened to the vicar (poor long-suffering dishy vicar) and his wife? You did say they were invited to the dreaded candllight supper as well...Anyway, this is a very small, small thing in an excellent story. Please write more!
Lizzie-the-barking-hamster 8/30/02 . chapter 1
Fantastic i could really visualise it. its one of those episodes you just wished had happened. Thank you and well done
David Giles 6/2/02 . chapter 1
Absolute Genius!

The characters are captured so very accurately and taken just a little bit further than originally. A real joy to read!
Tonnie 4/16/02 . chapter 1
you should write for the show! bring it back on! ...erm, work on punctuation in the dialogue though.

i knew it'd be Elizabeth the moment she and Harbringer were forced together by Hyacinth the Horrible (hehe)!

"I'll drink to that!" pure Drunk Daisy. (there just has to be at least one drunk at every television party, hehe)

instead of saying "Lead the way" Tex should've said "Ladies first!"

oh! when Hyacinth asked Onslow for a drink! that reminded me of when she had too much of that 'woosberry gine' in an episode. or when she was having that Indoors Outdoors party...no, wait. it was that Indoors Outdoors Barbeque With Finger Buffet. (yeah, i'm a KUA nut too)

Rose and Emmett kissing? you could write a BOOK about that!

the sound for Onslow's car was perfect!

ooh! when they were saying each other's name! "Herbert!" "Herbert?" "Tex!" "Herbert?" "Celia..." LOL

for once, Emmett's wishes came true; Hyacinth didn't sing.
i hate myself 2/24/02 . chapter 1
Bravo!

mutters: Serves Hyacinth right, i feel sorry for Richard!

Anyway the last line with Daddy running around naked was brilliant! Onslow seems abit strange, a bit more lively and clevery anyway good story!
Lelia Meridian 2/17/02 . chapter 1
In a word...GREAT! In a whole lot of words, it was brilliant! It has the voice and style of a real episode. I'm not sure if KUA is still on the air (its one of my favorites) in england, but if it is, definitley pitch this to them this was awesome!
Genesis Woman 12/10/01 . chapter 1
Brilliant story! You got the tone and attitude down pat! Who would've thought, Rose and Emmett? Ha!
Emily 12/7/01 . chapter 1
That was so, so funny. I loved it! Although during part of the dinner I almost forgot that Emmett and Liz were there. Great story. Keep it up! :)
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