Please, where is chapter 2? I have been waiting for along time...

Darleen

VERY nicely written :) -- subtly sweet, with the starts of a build-up that will make the end result all the more sweet - can't wait to read more!

Ah. Thanks to your last comment i don't have to ask if you're going to continue this story. I will await your update. Good luck with moving.

Love this story! When are you going to post the next chapter?

I'm not a big fan of Mckay/Sheppard... but just reading this story made me a fan. XD

It's well written and so well discribed! Very cute and sweet,the idea is so great that,I can't wait to read more!

Hope you update soon!

“'It’s like MENSA on ice.'"

Nicely written (lovely little touch of angst)and I liked McKay's voice. I'm looking forward to more.

UPDATE ASAP! ^__^