I love it! The writing is perfect and it has a fabulous plot. Please update as soon as you can.

Very Excellent again Creatress. I tried this idea also but it turned out very badly. Anyways Please please update or else...

one, i rly don't mean to sound mean but... *cough*
Author’s Note:

Hey all. Sorry this chapter’s a little short. Promise to have the next one out soon to make up for it.

Luv

Creatress
Creatress, i'm so sorry, but WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER YOU PROMISED!? augh! the only reason why i'm pestering this is because, i rly like this story (so compliment there) and i MUST know what happens next! eep! ah, and i wanna c how A/H relationship turns out! UPDATE ASAP! (plz)

Far to much A/H. Aside from that, I like it. The idea of Minerva and Opal teaming up...I would love to join that team!!

amazing story. there were just a few things i found odd.
1. i thought future-opal lost every bit of her magic and her ability to have magoc when she put human growth hormone into her ? so how come she has magic in this, and not only magic, but the ability to shoot awesomely cool magical frying rays out of her hands ?
2. this might be a little complicated but...you said past-opal faded into the time stream, or something like that. put future-opal goes on to mention that past-opal would have no problem breaking her out of minerva's prison when she thinks 'opal would soon break out of here. if her younger self could break her out of a high security prison, this little basement apartment would be a snap'. to me, this suggests that past-opal is still wandering around somewhere. if so, then either shes suddenly schizophrenic and will no longer take part in the plot, or she's going to pop up later. in which case: (time travel stuff coming) if she hasn't been mind wiped, which she can't have been because you said that future-opal was ready for past-opal when past-opal broke her out because she remembered breaking herself out, then assuming artemis wins in the end - won't past-opal remember losing and then future-opal be able to use that memory to stop herself losing because she knows how she was going to lose because she lost in the first place, effectively changing time ? (i don't think opal will have a problem with that)

i know it's rather stupid, and that i'm looking into things too much, but...could you explain ?

also, i noticed minerva said "Minerva stopped short and frowned. ‘Why would Holly Short go on a vacation while Opal was running loose?’" when talking to artemis, does she deliberately mention opal when artemis hasn't told her yet, to clue him in that she knows, as a test ? or is it a mistake ?

cheers. i overthink. it's a gift, and a curse ;)

Woah, I am suprised to say my favorite parts of this are actually when Opal/Minerva are plotting to take over the world...Opal is one of my favorite characters and my favorite villan ever, but I have a problem with Minerva. But you write both of them real well! Hope you update soon!

--shadowhunter17

NO don't just leave it like that!

Loving it so far. I'd like to see more of Opal and Minerva's plan to conquer the universe after they're done with Artemis though.

Please update soon

Ok, so far, excellent story, but I must address a pet peeve.

Artemis is Irish. The Irish tend to say Mam or Mum not Mom. Even if you insist on dropping half the letters out of every other word of the English language, please stick to canon in what Artemis would say.

Now that that's out of the way...

I love Angeline's perceptiveness. She always struck me as a sharp lady. I like how she's subtly trying to bring Holly and Artermis together, very cute.

As for Opal and Minerva. AWESOME alliance. I wondered why Minerva just dropped out of the picture for TTP. Will the Opal Minerva thing have romance, or will it just be two diabolical girls bent on taking over the world?

*goes off to read next chapter*

Great story even though I'm sure lots of people have told that already :) You captured the characters and their personalities really well. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Great fic! Will Holly be okay? What will Artemis do? What happens next? Update soon please!

*snorts* as if this wasn't a special delivery from Holly...

*ponders* what will Artemis do with the snippets of Holly's hair? leave it there, keep it, or throw it away?

oh, and wouldn't Holly notice if her hair was messed with? from what i recall, she doesn't have a lot to spare...,
brittney

UPDATE! NOW! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! NOW!

0.0 WOw
that so ...

UPdate soon ^-^

pretty good

Don't stop.