That was so worth the wait. What a cliff hanger! I'm so interested to see how Roy and Riza do on the other side, how Ed deals with it (because presumably they'll all run into each other at some point!), how they get back... This story is so fantastic I don't even have words, ever. I wish I had wrote it lol. Looking forward to the next update!

I so wish I could write like this. This is possibly one of the most well-written stories I've ever read... seriously. Update soon, please!

Nice! I loved your portrayal of angry Roy! Please don't make cliffies like Arakawa-sensei... They kill me... Keep up the good work! I'll be hanging around for more!

Update please! This story is very original and well-written.

What a great, intriguing start! XD I like it better than the movie already.

hey, things are getting more interesting. Since you left us with a cliffy, the next chapter must be good.^^

you know, some plot proggresion moving faster would be nice, its basically that you haven't covered much of the stuff in the summery, which makes it so that i spend the whole time i'm reading waiting for it to get to the stuff mentioned in the summery, its something that really bugs me, its the reason i hate spoilers

Ew!

Your discriptive power is amazing. I'm really quite scared! Raskoph is quickly becoming a favourite character of mine! Loved the end scene of the chapter!

Nice work!

SD04

How uncomfortable this makes me feel, in all the right ways. Every last word has me on the edge of my seat. You're certainly doing a great job of building suspense. I also (I might have said this before) really just love how seamlessly you manage to blend FMA and the real life details from WW2. I really cannot wait to see how this progresses. Hopefully summer won't slow you down too much! :)

whoa michael's like that girl in 'the book thief'

i love this story and i hope you update soon. hohenheim's attitude really annoys me... in a good way. :-D

If I were Hohenheim, I would give a good old beat down like they did in the old country. He just invited himself to stay. My mama told me never to do that. But that's Ed, whatcha gonna do?

OoHh how interesting ! I like how you wrote Ed here. pretty cool. and a nice easy pace for the story, just the right amount of info and intrigue~ cant wait for more!

Hey
I am really enjoying this, it is written well.
The Royai parts are amusing by the way! =D
Just a luttle personal note...I am missing Ed...will he be back in this soon?
Keep writing! =]

I love how dark and foreboding this story is. Each chapter just leaves me wanting more. You're doing an excellent job. I was glad to get some Roy-tachi scenes this time! They're my favorite, after all. :) Looking forward to the next update.