i like this story...plz update soon :) wow i really like your stories :)

nice, witty banter. good job overall

very nice.

wow, i make a ** borat...

i love this. so funny, well done!

haha this is good[:

and this story is ftw
bi-ele

ps. is there a sequel?

update soon i really like this!

HURRY! UPDATE!

plz?

ohh golly gee.
this story is amazing.
as amazing as Dumbo the flying elephant, and boy, he's AMAZING.
like he weighs tons and is not supposed to fly, but he does with his ginormous ears. :D
like for reals.
i cannot wait for the next chapter. [:

Oh shut up Sasuke. SHUT UP. yeah, SHUTTHE**UP. Shut up with your little, 'you and I could get to know each other very well in my car' innuendo. YEAH.
(Personally, I adore the, uh, catch phrase, it's quite hilarious, but when a senior or whatever yells out, 'I'd tap that!' while you pass by is pretty demn annoying. Like really, I thought the dude was a senior THREE YEARS AGO. How old is he, 27?)
Besides that, Sasuke's funny. He's straight-up actin' like a guy. Seriously, they never pass up on a chance to use a sexual innuendo (HA, is innuendo my word of the week?).
GOD SAKURA, just grab that condom and, uh, pull it over his head and pray he suffocates. Yeah.

Yeah, I like this. I'm laughing.
XD

Holy freaking crap.

The one time Sasuke's the first to fall, he ends up jumping off the cliff for a girl who rapes his hand?

Nice.

How old IS this lady? Because from this description I'm thinking I should be pretty freaked right now.

I love this story! Well, I love all your stories, but I really like this one!...But I like the other ones too...I'm not one to play favorites.

Blah.

Write On!

Alice

okay... so how come i don't know about these new updates? are you not on my alert list?
so not cool...
ur voice sticks out like a sore thumb in the crowd of mixed writers!

i like it. update this story first!

LOL! I love this new story!! PLz update!!

Yes, I enjoyed; no, I'm not going to tell you to do something else; yes, I'm excited for the next update; and yes, I love your story.

^_^ Wonderful story; can't wait to read more! XD

-dances.with.sunflowers.

Ew. Weird old lady.