That was damn great I like the idea of them hooking up and parting again and again.

Great. I love how you manage to convey their emotions through dialouge. There isn't internal monologue and yet the reader can still feel connected with them.

"Fuck Zack." "Probably not." Has Pooh_Bah ever mentioned that I worship you for that line? It has so much potential. . . .

that was kinda weird but i liked it.