lol love it that seems like it would happen

Oh LOL! That was a great fic. Davis and Yolei make a cute (yet unorthodox) couple. Really sweet, if you're not easily queased.

OH... this is so sweet and funny (v) The part where Davis throws up is hilarious. He should have listen to TK and the last comment which Yolei says about not kissing him before he has brushed his teeth is quite sweet and funny too. I like it a lot. Actually I like the entire story. Once again you have written a marvellous short story that has put a long-lasting smile on my face (v)

I'll bet you can't wait to get your hands on that toothbrush, Davis - you are SUCH a guy!

Haha, great stroy!

That was so freakin' cute!

:D

"Davis, that was disgusting. Fun to watch, but disgusting."

That was funny to me for some reason.

Great job!

, AWW!

Believable Daiyako!

You've done a fantastic job, again

"Davis, that was disgusting. Fun to watch, but disgusting."

Same ole Davis. So I suppose this is right after he got over Kari (which, quite frankly, would take a LONG time... he's clingy ). But it's cute, and they're pretty much in character (well, not THAT much, but they're still in character).

It's a good story. Great job!