This was the second time I came across this story. The first time I read the prompt I thought it was about their time in Hojo's lab. The second time I read the prompt I once again thought it was about their time in Hojo's lab. Lol. Anyway, I really liked it the second time through. I think I'm a little confused. Was Zack actually abusing Cloud? Was that where some of the blood was coming from? I got the part that Zack was bleeding from the skin from the shots. Anyway, this was really sweet. Well I mean the part about how Cloud loved Zack, but he learned to take him as he was. He still takes care of Zack throughout the whole ordeal. I kind of laughed when Zack tried to jump up through Cloud's window, but Cloud still refuses him. I like that you gave Cloud a backbone. Also, I like that you made both of them very masculine. Very creepy O_o Anyway, this was very good! Nicely done ^_^

awsome fic, i love the way you wrote zack

Wow... why no reviews? o.O I can't really find the right words to do this fic justice, but just know that I personally am amazed and impressed. =D I like how you made it seem like Zack was ALMOST a sort of drunk, abusive partner but then you showed how it wasn't really his fault and he still wants the best for Cloud. Also, good job on the descriptions. I feel like I got a good grasp on their expressions throughout the whole thing. Anyways, fantastic job. You should write horror novels. xD