... Aww, it's over. :(

I wanted more.

I find this fic lovely. Good job.

I'm not quite sure if you fully succeeded in the theme of "Vincent is not weak". You showed us that he is not, but the accusations weren't there. And where is the counterargument without the argument? I think you could've gone further with that.

I did really like the way this story flowed. It was well-written and I never wanted it to end. It was so... abrupt... yet appropriate. Well done!

Great story! Definetly faved. Loced the chemistry between Cid and Vince.

Well, I really liked this. It had very realistic writing and the way you played Vincent's angst and Chaos was very well written. Good Job!

AHAHAHA. love it.

"Bad for your health"? And turning into a monster and getting shot up isn't?

Very nice.