id almost given up on you! thank god that you updated, i needed a dose of MR! i luv this story so much! and i cant wait for the next chapter so that the flock can trust mas again!

LOL...This is AWESOME...I love it...LOL...Update Soon, PLEASE...:)

did u also know that the inside of buffets are green and subtle dark colors cuz it makes you more hungry? lol just a random fact

really good update soon i need action!! lol

~$tarr

First off, let me say I am SO proud of you for finishing your entire novel and then jumping back into this right away! If only I could be that motivated. (Never gonna happen, haha.)

This chapter was a really, really successful introduction back into the story. They kind of went through all the stages here: from the most tightly-held grudge to the very edge of forgiveness... All expertly crafted. I'm excited to dive back into this story! :)

--Melissa <3

Hey,
YOU'RE BACK! YES!
I love this story, and I was despairing of it ever being finished. I am very happy that you have come back to it and will be continuing it on a more regular basis!
This chapter made me very happy as well-well written, sweet, funny, just all around awesome.
Please update soon!
Yours,
Rayven

Oh my goodness, you have no freaking clue how much I've missed this story! And its every bit as good as i halfway remember it! I feel like I need to go back and re-read everything because its been so long...
No rush, but I can absolutely not wait for the next chapter!

NaNoWriMo?

Glad to see more of this!

Hello there! I was wondering when this story would be back. Just as good as i remembered. :) .My phone's about to die so I'll make this short...first, congrats on the novel. Keep us posted. Second, this chapter = wow. I love everyone's non-OOCness. Esp. Iggy. :) Third : no rush to updated...but I'm dying to know what's next. Great job!

I FEEL SO SAD I ALMOST FORGOT ABOUT THIS STORY D8
But when I read the first word in the 2nd(first not including the prologue), I suddenly remembered :D

Hope you update soon and belated Thanksgiving :D

why having u updated in like 7 months?!? :(( the story is very good i want more

HOW COULD YOU ABANDON THIS!? IT WAS FANTASTIC! PLEASE UN-ABANDON IT Or WHATEVER? PLEASE?!?!?!

I read through the prequel, and this story, and my only comment is : wow.
You. are. amazing.
(Worships, briefly).
Continue writing! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! My only annoyance was that you used to tell, not show, but that disappeared about twenty chapters ago :-D
I'm so glad Max is back with the flock, too :-D
Please update extremely quickly.
-Read4urlife

Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please update soon. I absolutely love your story and absolutely HAVE to know what happens next.

U-P-D-A-T-E

thats all

~$tarr

umm update? now? lol

i want more!

~$tarr

ps: actually not having fingerprints is worse than having them because without them you just become an easier target because everyone has fingerprints, so when forensics determine no fingerprints youre a main match instead of the millions of people with fingerprints...i took forensics =D

great story keep updating!