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Hpluvr7
2009-11-29 . chapter 8
id almost given up on you! thank god that you updated, i needed a dose of MR! i luv this story so much! and i cant wait for the next chapter so that the flock can trust mas again!
Rainie16
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
LOL...This is AWESOME...I love it...LOL...Update Soon, PLEASE...:)
Starr33
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
did u also know that the inside of buffets are green and subtle dark colors cuz it makes you more hungry? lol just a random fact

really good update soon i need action!! lol

~$tarr
melissaeverlasting
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
First off, let me say I am SO proud of you for finishing your entire novel and then jumping back into this right away! If only I could be that motivated. (Never gonna happen, haha.)

This chapter was a really, really successful introduction back into the story. They kind of went through all the stages here: from the most tightly-held grudge to the very edge of forgiveness... All expertly crafted. I'm excited to dive back into this story! :)

--Melissa <3
Rayven49
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
Hey,
YOU'RE BACK! YES!
I love this story, and I was despairing of it ever being finished. I am very happy that you have come back to it and will be continuing it on a more regular basis!
This chapter made me very happy as well-well written, sweet, funny, just all around awesome.
Please update soon!
Yours,
Rayven
fangluvr
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
Oh my goodness, you have no freaking clue how much I've missed this story! And its every bit as good as i halfway remember it! I feel like I need to go back and re-read everything because its been so long...
No rush, but I can absolutely not wait for the next chapter!
GoonlaLagoon
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
NaNoWriMo?

Glad to see more of this!
BlueWingedKitty
2009-11-28 . chapter 8
Hello there! I was wondering when this story would be back. Just as good as i remembered. :) .My phone's about to die so I'll make this short...first, congrats on the novel. Keep us posted. Second, this chapter = wow. I love everyone's non-OOCness. Esp. Iggy. :) Third : no rush to updated...but I'm dying to know what's next. Great job!
Yylaayl
2009-11-27 . chapter 8
I FEEL SO SAD I ALMOST FORGOT ABOUT THIS STORY D8
But when I read the first word in the 2nd(first not including the prologue), I suddenly remembered :D

Hope you update soon and belated Thanksgiving :D
fictioncrazy04
2009-10-21 . chapter 7
why having u updated in like 7 months?!? :(( the story is very good i want more
aka_tanja
2009-10-03 . chapter 7
HOW COULD YOU ABANDON THIS!? IT WAS FANTASTIC! PLEASE UN-ABANDON IT Or WHATEVER? PLEASE?!?!?!
Read4urlife
2009-08-11 . chapter 7
I read through the prequel, and this story, and my only comment is : wow.
You. are. amazing.
(Worships, briefly).
Continue writing! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! My only annoyance was that you used to tell, not show, but that disappeared about twenty chapters ago :-D
I'm so glad Max is back with the flock, too :-D
Please update extremely quickly.
-Read4urlife
A nony moss
2009-07-13 . chapter 7
Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please update soon. I absolutely love your story and absolutely HAVE to know what happens next.
Starr33
2009-07-05 . chapter 7
U-P-D-A-T-E

thats all

~$tarr
Starr33
2009-07-05 . chapter 6
umm update? now? lol

i want more!

~$tarr

ps: actually not having fingerprints is worse than having them because without them you just become an easier target because everyone has fingerprints, so when forensics determine no fingerprints youre a main match instead of the millions of people with fingerprints...i took forensics =D

great story keep updating!
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