why having u updated in like 7 months?!? :(( the story is very good i want more

HOW COULD YOU ABANDON THIS!? IT WAS FANTASTIC! PLEASE UN-ABANDON IT Or WHATEVER? PLEASE?!?!?!

I read through the prequel, and this story, and my only comment is : wow.
You. are. amazing.
(Worships, briefly).
Continue writing! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! My only annoyance was that you used to tell, not show, but that disappeared about twenty chapters ago :-D
I'm so glad Max is back with the flock, too :-D
Please update extremely quickly.
-Read4urlife

Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please update soon. I absolutely love your story and absolutely HAVE to know what happens next.

U-P-D-A-T-E

thats all

~$tarr

umm update? now? lol

i want more!

~$tarr

ps: actually not having fingerprints is worse than having them because without them you just become an easier target because everyone has fingerprints, so when forensics determine no fingerprints youre a main match instead of the millions of people with fingerprints...i took forensics =D

great story keep updating!

Hi, Lauren. :) Long time, no see. I'm catching up on my fic-reading.

Just re-read the end of TFA 1 and got all emotional again. D':
XD I'm such a sap.

Anyways...

Lol, Naruto.

Oops, I started laughing at Gazzy's joke before I even read the punchline. XD Good joke.

"No, don't do that," Angel pleaded. "I haven't gotten to hear your thoughts in so long. I missed it."
Me: Aww!

"It was odd how much I missed him still, even when he wasn't far away from me."
Me: Aww! D'X

"Iggy just shrugged, or tried to, anyway. It's a little difficult to do when most of your shoulder muscles are working to keep you from splatting on the ground."
Good thinking. :)

"This whole time, I kept my voice pitched so that sounds of our argument wouldn't reach the younger ones."
Yay, more thinking. Love all your little details.

Ooh, I love the Time Turner.
Itex with a Time Turner? Not so much.

Yep, you're still amazing. Even though it's been so long since I read this, you pulled me right back in. The emotion and tension are really painful, but that makes me love it.

I can't wait for an update.

Your faithful always eventual reviewer,
-Skye

dude. this si so good!!
you really have to update!!
:D

Defintly likeing the sequel but i LOVED the first one way more. it kinda went down hill for me at the end. dont get m wrong tho. I still love it!!

Did you know that I can control time and make it fast forward until you update your story?!

It's really cool, you know...

wow! im loving this story! i just started reading your fan fiction and I read the final adventure no.1 all the way till 5 in the morning... I kind of had a headache after i didn't get much sleep but i cant wait for your updates... keep up the good work ! ha! controlling time?.. lets hope that isn't bad for the flock-

update!update!update! plz! make fang forgive max PLEASE it sucks that he doesn't!

HEY!
I have to say this story was REALLY well thought out and carefully planned- it's nice to see someone writing a story on the basis of a SECURE plot instead of whether someone reviews it or not (that may not be bad, but personally i dislike those).
It was with immense sceptism (that spelling is off somehow) that i first read your story (the first Final Adventure) due to the recommendation of my friend- i thought the first chapter was the start of a boring, typical average plot, but you have totally proven me wrong with the strong development of characters and ESPECIALLY plot. It's nice to know that ITEX is not some weird organisation that somehow always CANNOT catch the flock and is wandering lost with TOTALLY NO PURPOSE except to be the flock's nemesis.
Regarding the FAX aspect,there wasn't extreme fluff- you kept things realistic and practical and into the essence of what makes the FAX relationship works so much. When you made Max leave, it was just so her- not those that had really funnily written angst or emo thoughts. You showed her to be rationale, and portrayed the emotions of leaving the flock with such sincerity and genuinity- and i believe JP (if he ever comes out with such brilliant ideas) would have written it this way too. And i love the new angle you're putting on to their relationship after the betrayal, instead of immediately plastering them back together- which would have been terribly OOC for both of them.
Thanks so much for writing this, and really looking forward to the rest of the chapters. Apologise profusely for being those that only reviews rarely, but in any case with a story like this i don't think you particularly need to jack up the numbers

"I still have the ability to kick your skinny white ass into next week" The part you are referring to was one of my favorite Max/Iggy scenes in the series. Still a really great storyline keep up the good work and update sooner please

Good old Angel and her ability to suddenly reveal important information as though she didn't know it was important...