Another good telling of this.
Thanks for the update.
Looking forward to the next one.

Yup, leave it to Jazz to make Dani sad over the whole psychological thing.

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Very good.
I like the use of words.
And how Dani trying to figure out her feelings.

I feel for sure that I'd like to see more.
Please let that be.

No one can fall in love so fast, that's a rule of life.

It takes time and that's something that seems to be lacking so far.

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This was short but still it's a start.

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