OMG!! great chapter. keep going. i wanna see some weapons training and some sedena/zuli romance. don't make this like harry potter by putting two completely random characters together. ron/hermioney was the worst ever. it should have been harry with hermiony

Nice story. Can't freaking wait for the next update. Keep it up!

Hello, sorry it's been a while.

Oh, now we hear how Zuli and Rose come into the exact situation like Stone and Sedena.

So what can I say about Rose and Zuli? A somewhat mirror resemblance to Stone and Sedena with a switching of the gender.

And getting informed about Stone's family tree...before it became burned.

Woah, do people regularly initiate sex that soon? Being a guy that's all...conservative like me, it seems kind of rushing into things.

Oh, the hardest thing for an adult to teach a child. The 'mechanics' behind procreation. Well they know the basics at least, but they didn't know about doing it also for pleasure and condoms. Explaining the basics is difficult enough, I couldn't imagine how akward it would be to go into greater detail...Or being interupted in the act.

"Not until 16..." Isn't that like the legal age in Texas?

Anyway, I have been reading each chapter you posted on, just not initiating leaving my thoughts.

HA! Sedena has a crush! i like it...

yay, very nice. Great father's day scene. I know where it came from too, so it was a pleasant surprise. Jennifer is turning out nicely, a well rounded character. All these introductions, I'm sure we'll not remember some of them. The only thing you have to make sure to do (nagging) is to make sure the spartans come across as characters, allowing people who read to go: wow, that's really personal, I feel attached to them as people. Instead of going: OMFG spartans, epic win lololol. Well done, and keep it up, you're making a good pace.

great chapter. keep going. i'm really liking this jeniffer character. i wanna her more about ian, i think he should be the misunderstodd guy, like me.

great chapter. i like this jennifer character

you never fail to deliver amazing chapters. i loved te fight with sedena and N'tho. that was baddass.keep going

Awesome!

Well nice chapter, needs more peepes getting beat on though. =)

amazing chapter. really great. keep going dude

About your detail work, creative thinking on different species, such as the sangheili, reactions to certain products and chemicals of ours. Makes me think about all the dieseases on other planets from other species of animal.

Really, if we'd encountered something like the Covenant, an alliance of a lot of alien species, we would likely be killed off by something as simple as their version of the common cold. We wouldn't even need the Flood to add to our problems. The Native Americans were killed off more by diseases than by guns, explains why there is no video-game based on that.

Well can't offer much more on this chapter other than those details that could have been ingnored but you added to bring a little light into the subject. I'm getting super far behind on reviewing your chapters that you post faster than I post a review or anything on Fanfiction.

GAH! Epic! I must admit I started out thinking that this was another relaxation chapter, but that all changed upon seeing the fight between N'tho and Zuli, well done! Catch you later.

great chapter as always, but a quick question; are we going to see other races besides elites and humans?

i hate harry potter, harry and hermiony should have hit it off. i dont like the morva/sedena thing. it feels wrong. i see morva as secondary. bring back zuli as sedenas partener

awesome job again. small suggestion as a halo fan, could u maybe put a spartan 2 cameo somewhere? im not sure about the whole canon accuracy about that, but i like the parts with the arbiter and the characters' reactions to him. it would also be cool to put a little more human pride in there (seems elites get all the perks physically)