i liked this story. clever idea but it lacked content and there were too many unanswered questions. other wise good tory.

WHAT??!! THEY DIED??!!
b-but,how?,why?,huhh?!
y did edward leave,and than they just DIED!!??
what happens to nessie??

good story,but the ending left alot of questions unanswered
and bella wasn't sick or anything.right?,how did she die then??

I'm confused. This story jumped around a lot and I don't know why they died, or why Edward left? There were a lot of things that needed to be explained.
It was well written though.

? :( ?
she forgave him way too easy girl!
xxzoxx

ok awsome story but i really dont get the endind

Please update soon! Luved it.

wait...what?
im confused...how did edward get to the house?why did he abandon bella?why did edward die?why did bella die? what happened to the baby?

aaw. great ending :)

OMG what a sad way to go.
amazing story

oh my god it was to short!

Why did they die?
I know Edward was sick, but why did Bella die?

GAH! MORE I'M ADDICTED! WHAT HAPPENEED TO EDWARD?!?!?! IS HE A VAMPIRE NOW?!?!? WILL HE COME BACK?!?!?!?MORE PLEASE! SON!



(p.S. I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER SOON! :)

omg amazing chapter! please update soon!

ome what is edward doing there when he said he was going to come back?!?!!

great! XD
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