Happy birthday even though I have mentioned it many times now!

This last chapter is sure something! Love Davis's point of view and the ending... Wow. It's just that good. I like Davis's emotional outburst. It sounds so sincere and real. I simply love the last section, "Kari wrapped her arms around his frail body as rays of piercing sunlight filtered from the dispersing rainclouds and illuminated the embracing friends and ridding the air of the eternal darkness." It's so well described.

This is an amazing story. A great chapter to end it. Super!(v)

First things first... HAPPY BIRTHDAY! (At least, that's what the forum tells me!) As for your birthday present, let me think up a good name, and then you can have it! That said, I might get Diane to beta it first... So today or tomorrow, right? Or I'll have "LAZY" tattooed on by forehead. With red ink.

Secondly- WELL DONE! Another smashing chapter-fic, FINISHED!

I absolutely adore the fact that Davis didn't toss his depression to the winds to be with Kari- that he's going to get his head sorted too. It made it so much more realistic than most stories- it was really great. Also, the part with the kids in the playground... I think most readers will be able to relate to that, which was good.

All in all, though this wasn't my favourite fic by you, it was still smashing. You did fantastically, as always.

Have a GOLD STAR!

Even though I'm a HUGE Daikari fan and this chapter's Daikari moments (well sorta) made me smile, I know it will be a Takari in the end. Even so, I'm interested in seeing how this fic ends so i'll keep an eye on it.

Oh I like Davis in this chapter. it's so deep and emotional. Poor Kari.

Why, Why did they have to break up? Why is destiny so cruel to them? Wait... it's you who have written it. I should ask you in stead(v)

Also poor Davis for feeling like that. Like your describtions of his thoughts. Super!

This chapter is as great as the other. You are rolling in with great ideas Keep up the brilliant work!(v)

Yay yay YAY! *sticks tongue out at TK*

...you cannot, repeat -CANNOT- leave us hanging like this! I SHALL GUT YOU!

FEINALLY ANN UPDAT.

Ah, so this is where Daikari comes in...xP

Wow! I like your description of this chapter and the plot is very deep and emotionel. The last part with the turtle suited this chapter very well. Great job! Can't wait to read more(v)

This chapter felt very... inspired? I think that's the right word.

How you explain the turtle thing really clicks well with Davis. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter ,

(Is it just me, or does this review read really formal?)

I beg to differ on how Davis uses English characters...but okay. :-)

“Operation: Sneak Into Kendo Tournament” ... giggles. love this.

i haven't read this fanfic for some times. anyway, i love this chapter.

hihi... “Is that a mushroom in your hair?” cracked me up...

This chapter is amazing too. I love the awkward silence between Kari & Davis. That was fun and having Kari mistaken him for a pervert is even funnier...

That is sweet of Davis to put the flowers in the back. I could totally imagine the last part where he is happy and is not aware of the surrondings and then walks into TK...hihi

TK being the protective boy friend is cool and funny too..

Amazing, that's all I have too say (v)

Update soon or at least when I have time to read them, like now! No I'm just kidding!

You really know how to outdo yourself, huh? This is also one of my favorites. I like Davis buying "Manly" flowers to Cody and also the last part where Kari asks him a question. I thought to myself...Oh my god what is he going to do now..!

Love this chapter. It has a lot going on(v)

ps. Cliffhangers is the best!

I like this chapter the best so far. I like Ken's role in this chapter and the line he says to Davis, "I feel like our roles are reversed now, you know? I never thought about it from your perspective before, and I realize now how hard it is to convince someone to do something they believe they really don’t want to" tmoved me deeply. Seriously this is good (v)

Even though you haven't a lot of emotions in this it's still good because you replace them with funny lines.. such as "His horoscope for that day should have been: Stay inside. You are likely to develop a nasty cold...". Good chapter!(v)