That was a sad, but beautiful story. I wonder if the movie or play is as good as this. Now I want to watch it. Maybe I will. I cried at the end. I don't particularly like death, but it fit the story line I suppose. It was indeed a wonderful story.

Ya-ha! A fanfic based on a play by the great Tennessee Williams.
Heck, I think he would like it very much, if he was still alive and all.
I know I did. I liked the few lines of momentum leading up to his death. And the blood? O_O That's a first for you, isn't it?
xD The fluff is all gone -chuckle-
No, it's still good. And good luck dorming in college!

Wow...

That was... just wow.

-speechless-

+10 points for Dutch!

Oh jeez, that was hard for me to read. I don't like depressing things. You did a nice job though. Now excuse me while I eat ice cream and read happy comedic fluff. >-

oAo WHOA MAN. that's really sad... TnT; But well written.

Wow, this is very... hard-hitting... I'm almost speechless, and a little shaky, seriously. You're right, Misty was very over-the-top, but I think it really suited the surreal atmosphere of the story. The irony of the story is what makes me a little nauseous... really heavy... don't read before bedtime, there is a risk of nightmares...

it all equals ♥ This story blew a hole in my gut, ouch... and I love it (does that make me a masochist?? :P )