Awesome story! Please update

Awsome story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out X3

I freaking LOVE this story! You just have to update! Please? It's awesome, it really is.

Wow! I really like this!
x3

Can't wait for more!!

-ichi

cute update!

I FIRGIN LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! But the last parrt kind of confused me. Can you please explain why she got dizzy? Thanks. I am bowing to your awesomeness!

Awesome chapter update soon.

Awesome chapter update soon.

Aw I like the progress they are taking, slowly but at a good pace. Good plot device with the brother so far too. I look forward to more, update again soon!

Awesome story update soon.

Neat story. Please keep writing!

I love your story line! Can't wait to see what happens next...

Despite a few hiccups, this story is very well written! It's interesting so far and you've done well. My only suggestion would be to edit your paragraphs a bit so it's more clearer as to who is saying what. Other than that, you're doing wonderfully with this and I hope you update soon! Happy birthday on the 14th!

i loved it!
fantastic story! i can't wait to see what happens next!

Another great chapter! It seems Dexter has a new "victim" to hunt! Don’t keep us waiting too long now for the next one!