good take on DID. i like it. looking up videos.

oh creepy @.o

The first Fight Club fanfic I've read, I liked it. It fit in with the movie (I haven't read the book either), you write well. I would've like to read more :)

I really enjoyed this story.
I can toally imagine it taking place after the movie/book.
It is really well done :)

lol! This is great! I love it that Tyler gets the last laugh in the end. Though I do wish he'd get credit for his work. I like to read more, please consider writing another chapter for this ^_^

Wow. This was AWESOME! My only complaint is that it wasn't longer! I mean it, you should write more of these. And I think your tone is perfect for the movie version of Fight Club ( which is all I have to go by seeing as I haven't read the book ).

Loved it. Loved it. Do more!