Great story even if you ripped of that other story

enjoyed it, continue plz thx

...interesting...

Weird... But I did read the Immortal series (which composed of two 'chapters'! :

Yes...this was different, but a unique concept none the less! A good start so far and... *extending hand* Welcome to the ranks of the SIFF! You should check out my own SI fics, starting with Heroes of Arcadia - The Gamemaster's Legacy.