Hello:

That was a moving and well-crafted tale. Thank you for including Angelo, along with Syd, he my fave char. Poor Sydney...he's done, seen, and felt so much, especially for his 'kids' J and MP, that he's a tortured soul but a very loving one. Bravo on capturing the spirit and dynamics of the characters so well.

SF

Another excellent story. You've really captured the personalities and the complexity of the MP/Syd relationship. Love those two characters. Ann

I loved the story. I would love to see a new sequal that comes out from this story that focuses mainly about Jarod and Miss Parker's relationship...

Bravo! Wonderful story! Thank you so much for writing it. I'm such a sucker for the Syd/MP relationship, there's so much angst there, so much complexity, and you've captured it all quite beautifully. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Great story - and very climatic ending. It is great how you brought Sydney and MP together - finally she sees and understands. Her stubborness sometimes shows her pereception of "Centre" truth - but not Sydney's nor Jarod's. Don't know where the clone is - but trust that she is safe and getting the help she needs. Interesting that Mr. Parker tells Raines to drop it - he has no other choice, I suppose. Good 'ole Sydney - also the emtional supporter, even when he also needs it. As I said earlier, I enjoyed the story. Take a rest - and then return with another great work. Thanks so much!

Ah.. that was the best! Although, I was proved wrong about Sydney I still liked the ending. Sydney saying "Blood no longer matters." Was so sweet.

If anyone can say that they are a father to Andrea and Jarod, its Sydney. He is the one person who has done his part over the years to keep them sane. Bravo. A very nicely done story.

Thank goodness that Ms. Parker is not dead. The Pretender wouldn't be the same without her. And I think that sooner or later, Parker and Jarod are going to admit how they feel about each other.

HOW DARE YOU! How dare you kill Ms. Parker! This clone is going to pay, and pay HARD for what she has done!

Hi Lurker,

Bravo! That was a great story. Powerful,intriguing and very moving. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Mercy

WOW! I have waited so long for this story to be completed-Thanks Lurker for this wonderful, suspenseful, and entertaining Pretender story! Please, Please, Please, do write more Pretender stories! I love how you portray Sydney's and MP's relationship in your stories. As always I will continue to look for all your stories here on ffn and on both your web sites.

Thanks Again, Elisa

Thanks for an enjoyable story.

Enjoyed it tremendously.

Great chapter.

Whew! Thank God. You had me fooled. But hey, don't stop here! You'll write more soon, right? I'm really enjoying this story. Good job!

Can't believe it took me so long to finally read this! It's amazing. And I think I know what Sydney isn't telling her! Or at least I hope I know. Don't hold us in suspense too long!