 Norikio Na No Da 2008-10-06 . chapter 4Awfully cute! I've been in Hutch's shoes before. Come to think of it, Starsky's, too...though I've never gone so far as to get a bone broken in the scuffle. Love the dialogue! :D |
 KKBELVIS 2008-10-06 . chapter 4“Nipples. Use your imagination.”
“You always say I have a dirty mind and now you want me to use it?”
LOL...OMG this was so damn funny. The whole story had me rolling and I love their back and forth banter. Starsky's such a trouble-maker LOL -- so cute! I almost died laughing reading the part about Starsky being glad he didn't break his left hand after reading Hutch's hot story.
LOL..Poor Hutch..he'll never get that book written with jabber-jaws Starsky around.
'Help, I'm talking and I can't shut-up.' LOL...
Hysterically fun!
Thank you, for this treat,
Karen
"Love is a light that shines
from heart to heart."
John Denver |
 KKBELVIS 2008-10-05 . chapter 2“I need time alone Starsk, I need to isolate myself from the distractions of the outside world to get in the mood of the story.”
Isolation...a writer's friend and foe...it is hard for Starsky to understand Hutch's need to be alone...and now the poor boy has broken his arm.
Good.
Oops...did I write that out loud? LOL.
Enjoying,
Karen |
 KKBELVIS 2008-10-05 . chapter 1What a fresh breath of writing this is!
I love reading about Hutch writing a book...
Through Hutch's writing, I bet we learn a lot about the art.
You write their banter so that I can hear them within me, Nell.
Ejoying...
Onward,
Karen |
 brook5 2008-10-03 . chapter 4that was really cute |
 aussie angie 2008-10-02 . chapter 4Thanks for this little story sometime these little snippet are just as good has the long ones can't wait for your next story. |
 nicoltyler 2008-10-01 . chapter 3ROTFL Not a good day for the guys. Maybe they should have just stayed home in bed. would have been safer. lol |
 aussie angie 2008-10-01 . chapter 3I did like it when Hutch fell and their both where injured at least their were both at the right place to get fix so we will wait for the next chapter |
 aussie angie 2008-10-01 . chapter 2Poor Hutch he fills so guilt about the accident but you know Starsky has something to do with do until the next chapter. |
 provencepuss 2008-09-30 . chapter 1you guys are laughing now...you just wait (I've seen all of it remember). Nelleke you have a natural gift. |
 batbair 2008-09-29 . chapter 1Hysterical, I'm still laughing and I can't stop. Very true to the characters! More, more |
 Bobbie Barkley 2008-09-29 . chapter 1I like the start of this story! Very good. Loved Hutch's hesitation to share what he was doing, and really loved Starsky's unbridled enthusiasm! |
 brook5 2008-09-29 . chapter 1that was funny..the way hutch reacts to starsky.. |
 aussie angie 2008-09-29 . chapter 1A very interesting story just of late there sims tobe alot of new story that are so different that I think it just great thank Ukkie for this story. |