This is really good! These characters are rounded in a way they could never be on board Voyager--human lives are messy things, with relatives who aren't talking to each other, small children ("Today the wastebasket--tomorrow the world!"), holiday gatherings, and sand _everywhere_ after going to the beach.

Well done.

I love all of your J/P stories and this one was just as amazing, but I think my favorite is still 'new favorite'

yea, people are updating. Man i want to get out of writers block! UH! Sorry I so want to update my jp story. loved it.

Oh, I just love your J/P stories! Especially this one. Please keep them coming.

I'm a die hard P/T'er but this worked for me. I could believe each thing that happened and the characters felt right and real.

lovely ending.

Needs more. The ending seemed incomplete. Maybe an epilogue?

OMG...this story rocks. It's nice to see a pairing other than Chakotay/Janeway. I do wish she could have gotten pregnant though...but I love how she took to Miral and everything. I hope to read much more from you.

I really am a J/Cer but I do like the occasional J/P and others this was a really great story I loved it~ i do think a sequel is in order, plus I would loved to know what C did to ** her off as if I didn't know the person just the how and where might Tom and Kathryn be heading!

This story was wonderful. Thank you for a great afternoon read. I love when Tom and Kathryn end up together.