wat a great fic! awesome job!

You got her reached just right! She always jumps to conclusions, always to proud, always yelling, and over all BITCHY!

I personally HATE Videl. I have always though Gohan could have done better...a LOT better. (hm... maybe Lime?)

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TALK ABOUT CUTE! THAT WAS THE BEST G/V FIC EVER EVER EVER! I CRIED I COULD ACTUALLY IMAGINE THE STORY PERFECTLY AND AND NO ONE WAS OUT OF CHARACTER AND THRERE WAS A HAPPY ENDIN THIS WAS AWESOME TANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!

So sweet! So sweet! So sweet! *Hugs author*

This is easily the best story i have read on

very good ending, good use of emotions, and very well written. very very good

Ahh! This is so sweet-not the typical Gohan/Videl fic either-very original, i loved it!

WOW! great fic!

such a sweet story and it made me cry too i love it!write more!1

Nice fic.

Hey! I'm already your biggest fan, and I just found you an hour ago! Unfortunately, I just found out about the contest. Any way it can be extended at all? Or that you can post another one? I would love to try my hand in it.

This is great! I'm entering your contest, so look out 4 my email.

I love your I totally agree there r

not enough V/G fics around! i have written like 20 but Im clueless to how to submit them.I also cant stand lemons_! Email me and tell me how to submit fics and I'll enter your contest

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GOOD! keep writing, onegai shimasu with sugar on top!

hi i'm going to read your fic as soon as I enter your contest here it is called Blue Portal this one has NO lemon for me thats a fic few and far betwene . ?storyid486916 that link is to the fanfiction

Hey.. I like! This fic really portrays Videl's and Gohan's personalities very well, and is also very sweet.. I love sweet fics! Write more, please? About the contest: I'll probably enter it to, just fer kicks .;; That is, as soon as I decide what to enter..