This is pretty good. I hope you add some more soon.

This is really cool so far! I shall skim over the slash, but otherwise, I really like this! Please update soon!

Interesting chapter. The action is very well played and Chas is delightfully infuriating.

Keep it up!

Did you, erm, forget this story or something? Because its almost been 7 months since you've written it... Just wanting to know if your gonna continue, cause i really like it! :)

This is so good, and you get everyone's personality down perfectly! I hope you continue this amazing story!

Hey! No Matter How many times i read this its so damn cute! X) please Update soon! Im really looking forward to the next chapter!

Yes, short chapters, but I like the plot idea. Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon! ^^

Ah, so things are starting to get interesting, here. I smell a battle on the horizon.

Poor Roy, everybody sleeping all over him... d'aww...

Oh, it's not that bad, it's adorable! (Still not sure how the EdHughes thing's gonna work for you when Hughes is married, but whatever.) Btw, I'm confused by the beginning of chapter one. Is that suppose to be a scene from later in the story? (Heh, heh...watching the FMA movie...heh, heh...) Please update!!^^

I read this because I want to know where you're going with it. Keep on writing.

Finally some Ed/Hughes! And this story seems good so far! I'm totally going to read this!

By the way, are they in Central or not. Maes said something about going back to Central soon.

Your writing style is good. You could very well do longer chapters but shorter ones are good also.

Please, update soon!

D'aww... I love the interactions between Maes and Gracia. I luffs her so much. Gracia doesn't get enough love.

And Al and Elysia are so cute...

I'm dying to know what's going on with these Alchemic murderers. Sounds pretty gruesome, whatever's going on.

Can't wait for an update!

Aw! Thats so kute! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Hikaru9 here!

I have to say i'm very intrigued by the beginning and i definitely will be waiting for more. :D

Ooh, a promising start! The world needs more love between our boys that isn't PWP. I really want to know what's going on in that first part... but I suppose all shall be revealed eventually *clings to edge of seat*

And, OMG, the image of Hughes holding a kitten has got to be the cutest thing EVAR.

...and also, I totally spazzed when I saw the name Mindy. *cough*

Can't wait for more!