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WithABunny
2008-10-04 . chapter 1
It's easy to tell that you are a seasoned pro at writing fanfiction, even without your revelation.

You see, it takes a special kind of writer to pull someone like me into a fandom I don't even frequent very often. In fact, I'm never sure I had heard, seen, or read about Diego prior to reading this, and Mia Fey wasn't someone I was entirely familiar with, as with the series itself.

I'd just like to say that this was beautiful, amusing, and gave real justice to its genre - Romance, in this case. It isn't overly smutty or anything like that, but their love shines clear, especially even in the last line. Not only that, but you get extra points for making it (said last line) refer to the previous scene.

Your writing skills are made of AWESOME (as is this story). Enough said.
Arctic Husky
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
So sweet, and so tragic; that's Mia/Diego for you, heh.
Hilariously enough, I'm working on my first Phoenix Wright fanfiction and it is similar to this one in a lot of ways. The sad reality of Mia/Diego is that it's so short-lived that there's a limited number of situations to write them in.

In short, that was a really lovely read. As others have said, the ending, especially the last line, really made the fic.
Elixhay
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
...That ending sentence was pure GENIUS. This was a really sad fic...but it was very, very well written. I hope you write more Phoenix Wright fanfiction! 10/10
Aussiesrule34
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
wow! stunning ending...
princessphilomena
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
Aww...that was sweet ^^
I especially liked the ending :)
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