Its good yo its good. But I think that you really need to expand this story yo. Just a suggestion man.

aww...:3
what a cute story! :D
YAY! >:D

GO BOTAN! Awesome job!
-D101

! SHIZU! YOU HID THIS FROM ME!

Omg, I died of cute. It was just cute, cute, cute and more cute. I wanna write KuwaYuki fluff now. DANG IT! Gotta get up early.

Then I shall do it tomorrow! lol

wow! awesome One Shot!

I love your Kuwabara/Yukina based stories.

Please write more longer ones! You are very talented^^

Ha! A good one, though a little abrupt. And the characterization was decent, much better than what I usually see nowadays. I'd say job well done.

aw that was so cute! i love this pair and i dont think they ever get enough credit or fanfiction time (w/e you want to call it)
dont worry, nobody was OOC in my opinion. botan would be the one to do something about it. and those two would seem hesitant.
all in all i loved it. short but sweet. good job!