wow...*eye twitches* um...im utterly speechless...kabuto is a uke eh? *leers/evil grin.. very..well done lemon i have to say thou i nvr thought anyone would actually do a kaboro like tht...^_^

I love Orochimaru! even though hes a creep >__< and its always more kinky when its on camera. expecialy if someones watching. I would've loved to be one of Kabutos patients watching that. XD LOVED IT!

Ugh. I... think you're my hero. xD This was absolutely fantastic, and by far one of the best pieces of writing I've read on this site. Not only was it incredibly hot (and not boring white-bread sex), but you also have a solid grip on these characters, making your fic seem so grounded.

The only error I saw (and I can't help but point it out, it's like a tick xD) is the use of "sennin" where it should be "sannin". Sennin is hermit, or sage, but sannin is the legendary three shinobi. Other than that, though, everything was perfect. This is definitely going in my favs. 8D

*epic nosebleed* EPIC! 8D That has to be the BEST OroKabu lemon I have ever read!

But I haven't read many so there are few to choose from, but hey! Yours was still awesome!

Awesome job!

~AkiChan323~

::wipes drool from face:: YEAH!

M...steamy...hehe...
I really enjoyed this. Your writing is frank and enjoyable. And that was a great lemon...
Keep it up; you've got a good talent for this.

~kAiRi Of UzEnIbA cLaN

LOVE IT!! Can I use your story on my website? Its a YAOI FANSITE! If you say yes I'll send u tha link!

Wow. AWESOME! Easily one of the best Orochi/Kabuto fics I've ever read. I love how you describe...well...everything! Good job, and keep up the good work!

-Hoshi

That was utterly sexy. And I don't know what to classify it as either.It's got lemony freshness what ever it is.

ow... totally hot!
i like it when Kabuto intentionally screaming Oro's name... such a naughty boy!

good work!!

*review my fic please? ;)

Haha, I just love the imagery it gave me, very hot. And your wording is good to.

he he! Lemon meringue pie! It's all lemony goodness to me! If you want to know: lemon- sex, lime- sort of sex (** and that) Love this pairing! So kinky with that tongue of his! XD

I love this pairing! The fic is written perfectly! *adds to fav*

Hot hot hot! Definitely faving this :3

i've been meaning to get around to reading your stuff for about three months now, so now i finally did. HOLY **! kay, that was very very good. like, not even just that it was hot and IC, but you're a really good writer. excellent job. have a metaphorical cookie. ^.^