You need to continue this.
I want Cobo and Kuku to baby-sit
more and get them a babie!

This was so cute. The idea of slightly obsessive, overly adoring father Leon makes me want to laugh my ass off but at the same time have an inner squeeing fit because it's so cute. The first two paragraphs - they were perfectly written, it just painted the picture of how devoting a father he was, almost exactly as I would imagine it to be for a parent. And I love Riku's determination to dislike Nanami but how he's won over in the end, how even he can not resist in the end, aww. But the bit I think you wrote the best was where Riku and Cloud discuss adoption (again) and Cloud says that as much as he wants kids he wants them with Riku and I don't know why but that little bit of dialogue was so sweet. The whole passage was adorable, I loved how you wrote every little bit of it. Thank you

kya! that was amazingly adorable, i loved that Riku almost fell asleep with baby Nana i mentally squealed! that bit desperately needs a fan art pic! please! and Cloud is evil planning on coaxing Riku into wanting a child he deserves to be called Cobo. again Riku and Nana were adorable!

This is a brilliant story. I laughed all the way through. I agree with you, Leon would be weirdly obsessive with a baby. Great story

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OMG. Ayumi and Leon?! lol. Nanami sounds adorable and I'm liking her already. I'm picturing her with Leon's hair and Ayu's eyes.

Anyway, this is really great. Had me laughing out loud at most parts and smiling. I really love it. As usual, you wrote them all wonderfully.

Haha, that was such a cute story! I'm kinda awkward around kids like Riku was; it took me a while to warm up to them.

Btw, 100 Steps is still amazing as well!

"Cloud nodded. He watched Riku for a few more moments and then left the couch. He walked over and sat behind Nanami. She wobbled into a seated position, grabbed a block in front of her, and stuck it in her mouth.

“Isn’t that precious?” said Riku."

Riku sarcasm and whining equals epic win.