|Reviews for Seven|
| T. Alana M 5/14/13 . chapter 1
Wow. Guess Stephenie Meyer didn't really think that one through when she was making her little sue world did she?
| Anzer'ke 4/27/13 . chapter 1
You utter utter b*st*rd.
Not to say you aren't a very good writer, but I clicked this link for a good read with some exposition of Twilight's issues and I really just...was not ready.
It's funny because I can't help but compare it to Negima's character Evangeline, the archetypal centuries old vampire in body of a pre-teen girl. Said character frequently goes through the kind of things we see here (sexual overtones, lingerie etc) and yet the effect is simply comedic. It humanises a character who is clearly mentally adult and makes her physical state an amusing pseudo-karmic annoyance to her.
You just did a very good job of demonstrating the endless horror of inverting that. I already understand in the mental sense that it was nasty but this story drove it home in a visceral fashion that made me puke in my mouth a little.
So you utter b*st*rd. You shining example of brilliance.
Now excuse my while I go watch a nice episode of My Little Pony and try to purge my mind with shiny happy cartoonishness.
Peace out and Rock on,
| Justice333 4/25/13 . chapter 1
Wow, this really brought on an interesting perspective for me. Didn't think about it much. Really shows how wrong the situation is. It's all up to interpretation, I like seeing how you played with this concept.
| Radda 4/13/13 . chapter 1
OMG, I already think that would be the implication that Meyers was implying with Renessme and Jacob. Eww...
| BrightStar Kenobi 4/10/13 . chapter 1
WOW this is completely true its does not matter how old she physically but her chronological age
| CatgirlCarrieKelley 3/26/13 . chapter 1
Fucking basically implied and shit in the books. So, you know, kudos for writing this. I just...fuck, man, damn.
| wolfwriter101 3/24/13 . chapter 1
pOkay people who say Jacob would neber do this because he imprinted.../p
pSAM AND EMILY YOU FUCK HEADS! SAM AND FUCKING EMILY!/p
pHE [I]RIPPED[/I] HER FACE OFF WHEN SHESAID NO! SHE MADE IT CLEAR SHE DID NOT SUBMIT TO HIM! ACCORDING TO YOUR PRECIOUS CANON THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT WOULD HAPPEN BECAUSE MEYER IS TOO FUCKING [I]STUPID[/I] TO REALIZE HOW WROG SHE MADE IMPRINTING!/p
pJake/Nessie is WRONG! Meyer ruined her series in BD the sheer AMOUNT of backlash from the fandom proves that!/p
p Emotional and Mental maturity are completely different things. Nessie would NOT be emotionally mature by 7.../p
| EndoftheWorlds 3/23/13 . chapter 1
Jesus Christ! D: I mean, I knew this is pretty much what it's gonna be like. Even if her brain grows at her body's rate, a person's maturity is based on experience, not biology. This fic pretty much epitomizes what's fucked up about the whole Renesmee thing. Good fic, just horrifying.
| Norrrrrrrrrr 3/16/13 . chapter 1
I really liked this, but its too uncomfortable to favourite. Well done all the same.
| red 3/10/13 . chapter 1
first i wish talk to this rachel sadly i cant because shes a moron if what she was true saying then the whole sam leah thing would never have happend sam would been emily sister jacob was trying to make it less creepy
| YumiDoesTheMacarena 1/17/13 . chapter 1
... I like 'Eighteen' better. It's much, much, MUCH more satisfying. But this... this is really, really good as well. It's very powerful. And awful.
| SummonerDagger88 1/10/13 . chapter 1
I love it, great dark fic
| Moriwen 1/4/13 . chapter 1
In a good way.
Not a nice way, but a good way.
| Vladimir43ofMorgul 11/27/12 . chapter 1
Someone finally showed how disgusting Jacob and Renesme's relationship really is!
| YlvaThorgalsdottir 11/23/12 . chapter 1
Thank you. Thank you for posting a deconstruction and realistic rendition of imprinting on babies Jacob's personality. I never got how Bella could think her daughter growing up in a few years was equivalent to her being ready to have adult relationships in a few years.