again very nice. the story was short and a little rushed but unlike a lot of fanfic writers you have potential. it would probably be beneficial to get a beta, to help with the spelling and maybe a little on the grammar. anyway i like it a lot, keep up the good work!

very nice. i noticed your grammar is very good. and enjoy being a freshman while you can. once you're a senior you're not going to have a lot of free time!

i remember that book, poor tobias, that scene almost made me cry!

very good so far, watch your spelling thought. like 'torture', and so forth, but other than that i must say i'm intrigued and plan on reading the rest!

Great .

Awwwwwwwwww, that's soooooo sweeet. I love it.

It's good. Tons of brotherly luv :)! The spelling could be a bit better. But one thing I don't get: wouldn't Dragonus, and the MDs, have put up a bit more of a fight between eachother?

It's a good thing that it ended happy, other wise...oh hell, what would I do? Ducks Rock!

FINISH! lol jk, that is a great way to end the story, but FINISH! lol, well like

always you have mangaed to pull off another excellent piece of work

You are soooooooo good! It was so cute! I liked your referance to Digimon*starts singing*

Bernie the Penguin: It was very well written and I liked the happy ending.

Beautiful!

Write more!

It was a happy end, wasn't it?*laughs* I love it when people do that...

oh well, I love them to write, too*sighs* Well, everybody is writing wonderful MD stories,

maybe I should finish mine, too...I mean, I just started it...two weeks aho*sighs again*

Okay, okay, I leave.

YEAH! Go Wi;dwing. Wow he can sing.

OH NO!

WILL DIVE DIE?

YOU CAN"T DO THAT!

Hey!

I really loved his story a lot, and I hope you update ASAP! Your writing is great and I'm a sucker for the whole brotherly bond type stories. I don't know why, but the bond between siblings just facsinates me for some reason. I'm rambling, sorry,...just...post more soon!