I like rachel in this better than in the show right know.

Her and peyton seem to be on there way becoming good friends.

great ud

everything about it was good.

I loved the new chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great writing and please please please post more soon.
Tanya

BEautiful! Loved it! Update soon!

omgoodness good chapter

ok I loved that Peyton and rachel came a bit closer to each other and I liked the skills nathan deb thing... I always thought it was so funny hahah

great job

update asap

artemi

so so so so nice... great job sweety...


update asap

artemi

I so love it! Update soon!

Aww

I am so glad ori is able to stay with her bio parents. Casey did the right thing.

I hope jake will be ok too. Jenny cant lose her dad.

wow
great chapter

I'm so happy that this story is starting to get updated more frequently. I hope the frequent updates continue! That being said, this was a great chapter. You keep all of the separate storylines flowing very well. I hope some of them interact soon. I loved Oriana in this chapter. She's very wise for her years.

Wow... I love this story...

beautiful update
all around i love the update
Naley Jamie's dreams are coming true
Jeyton are going stronger then ever glad jake told her
Brucas what can i say but love them to piece there juts brucas
cant wait for the next update

I love it! Update asap

Wow peyton told jake about the baby she and julian had but lost. And the fact that she cant have kids.


I love your explanation of brooke reaction to the kiss at the naley wedding. It does make sense and seem like for the show that could of been her reaction too. Too bad it wasnt or explained like that.


I wonder what jake told owen that he still needs to tell peyton about.

AN amazing story. You made them all seem in character and I love how you twisted the plot line. I wish season could've gone something like this... Oh well, you can't always get everything you want. Love Brucas though. Hope you update soon.