Wow. That sure was deep, and insightful! I throughly enjoyed this oneshot (which I usually don't like to read oneshots... ^^ lol what a way to be reintroduced to the DP phandom!) and I can't wait to read more of your work! Seriously, this has some genious behind it.

KEEP WRITING!
~Sam

That was a really great story. I even started to cry when Tucker was mad at Danny. It takes a lot to make me cry for a story. So congrats to you

Great job.

This is very very very good. Are you going to update?

Beautifully written and a perfect response to the freakshow incident.

While I understand that DP isn't intended to be Buffy, I often feel that it would be better served had they included more lingering trauma over various events.

This story had me gripped from the first line. I couldn't take my eyes away.
Absolutely fantastic!
It would be great if you could write another chapter or maybe a short sequeal.

oh my god, the angst every turn you take, every step you make...
*blink, blink* let me catch my breath...
What a brilliant piece, well written and had me chewing my fingernails to the quick.
"Okay everybody, gather round! Group hug!"
I was near emotionally wrung out by the end. Thank goodness you threw the reader a bone there right at the last. Otherwise I would be obessing on this all night. Still might need to make myself some hot milk!
Some hot writing here girl!

god. you do angst so f*ing well.

this one was crazy emotional. but holy crap, was it good. it kind of struck me all of the sudden while i was reading it, how dramatic you've managed to make these characters and situations that were meant to be a part of a children's show, all the while keeping the characters so incredibly in character. awesome, awesome work. i completely loved this one - it so toyed with my emotions. i love stories that do that. :D

was that enough gushing for you? lol :P

-cA

Very interesting story, It was good.

*blinks* ...that took about two hours to read...

great story though (because it's so long)

brittney

happy ending are fun
and i was gunna say something, but i completely forgot. dammit.
lol :D i'm such a fool.
i absolutely positively LOVED thiss

Wow, that was a really long one-shot. I haven't read a Danny Phantom fanfiction in such a long time.

So she hid it for 3 years, I got to say, keeping that bottled up for so long...pretty impressive.
Poor Tucker really misunderstood the situation. At some part, I thought this story wasn't going to have a happy ending. I mean, there was so much problems...
Then again, the ending was a sappy happy ending either, it was more like a...'Lets hope everything gets better from now on' kind of ending. It was nice. Good work =)

I've always liked how you switched to different views. That lets the readers know how everyone- Danny, Sam, Jazz and Tucker -feels about the situation. I felt kind of bad for Tucker. He was truly left in the dark for so long.

I love how loyal and caring Jazz is. Even though she's suppose to be studying hard she instead dumps it and leaves to aid her brother.

Anyway, nice work you two =) It was great reading a Danny Phantom fanfiction.

well, i'm glad you accidentally worked me a cameo in there that neither of us caught whilst proofreading. PWNAGE! :P

This was a very good story. Everyone was perfectly in character, though I honestly thought Jazz knew the whole story of the Circus Gothica Incident.

Thanks for the mention. I'm honored my story inspired you.

I was right, this was definitely better in your hands. Not at all the direction I would've gone, but very well-told and intriguing. I am SO relieved they worked out the misunderstanding. Nothing frustrates me more than a misunderstanding continuing without resolution. This, OTOH, was my kind of angst... it all ends well. Or at least, headed towards well.

BTW, I noticed you used "Jas" instead of "Jazz" once. :)