Aww Dana to the rescue! I love it! Its sweet how she sat and protected them...i like this side of her! I wish that Royce wasnt so mean though...i think him and Dana would make a cute couple but that's just me! Great job on this =3

Poor Ally...I can't believe Ryan is such a friggen jerk. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

YAY! I'm so glad you updated! This chapter was great! Can't wait for the next one!

thank you so much for updating! I really like this story, and you can't find a whole lot of good stories for 13 ghosts.

wtf. I clicked on your story thinking 'oh, cute, a story about child ghosts, this'll be a refreshing change of pace from all the marysue romances' and then i hit the rape part and it was like i'd opened the arc of the covenant and my face melted off. Don't do that to the jackal. There's no logical reason for him to rape a child. You could sort of see how his twisted mind would justify raping prostitutes-because his mother was one and he either had some kind of Oedipus complex or just grew to resent prostitutes because he resented her, but he didn't rape or kill any children, and, as far as his history states, any women that weren't prostitutes. attacked, but never killed/raped. and those were also nurses, not children. bizarro.

your writing itself is pretty good. I don't care too much for the plot as it is typical of the new 13th ghost cliche but you work with what you can eh. nice to see billy as the focus character for once. not nice to see the jackal raping children.

I love your 'The Lonely Baby' story. I really hope you continue.

Please Continue.

Ok I love this so far and I would really love it if you would update soon!

Billy's so adorable!

Great chapter and i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon as you can please my brothday is torrow

Pore Ally!
can't wait for the next chapter!
You rock!

Great chapter 3 and i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon as you can please i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon as you can please. I hope you will write more of it soon please

Great chapter two and i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon as you can please i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it and again great story and even great chapter one and two

Love It!

fwsfw