This story is really update soon!

Love it hope u post more 3

the story was awesome. i cant believe this is one of the few storys like this. ]

Really, well your fiction, that's when the next?

This is a good story. Please continue. Eva/Molly and Jordan forever.

xcellent chap!

It had to be the best Goodbye scene i've read! LOVE IT! Glad for the update! Please update again soon!

WOW! That was pretty good! I'd LOVE to see it continue! Can't wait!

Awesome! Although It's a little short for my liking, but I think a can make an exception for a story like this. Please continue.

fukin!great!UPDATE!

Hello Flora sorry I didn't review earlier what with all of my stories including what I write for you ha ha... Anyway I do find a good romance enjoyable so here is what many romantic people will be thinking: Will they get into a truly intimate relationship? How will this affect their duties as avatars? Will they never truly see their family and friends again? Pertaining to the last question if they truly do not get to see their family and friends again you would have to create an entire cast of new characters and that is hard work and takes a lot of documentation. Other than my personal views on how this story will work I must admit that you make a very intimate and loving atmosphere involving Eva and Jordan and this is a wonderful thing to focus on. In future chapters try and insert some flirtatious dialogue between them during everyday events to make them seem more like a couple. Well there I did my review Flora I hope you take my opinions to heart and don't find anything offensive I hope your story progresses well like the ones I make.

ya i luved this show when it was on air..but now its not and it had quit a sad ending because I wanted EVA and JORDAN to be together but whtevr...luv ur story

I like it

Is really cute!

DUDE WORK FASTER! MUST SEE NEXT CHAPTER!

love it