This is a good story. Please continue. Eva/Molly and Jordan forever.

xcellent chap!

It had to be the best Goodbye scene i've read! LOVE IT! Glad for the update! Please update again soon!

WOW! That was pretty good! I'd LOVE to see it continue! Can't wait!

Awesome! Although It's a little short for my liking, but I think a can make an exception for a story like this. Please continue.

fukin!great!UPDATE!

Hello Flora sorry I didn't review earlier what with all of my stories including what I write for you ha ha... Anyway I do find a good romance enjoyable so here is what many romantic people will be thinking: Will they get into a truly intimate relationship? How will this affect their duties as avatars? Will they never truly see their family and friends again? Pertaining to the last question if they truly do not get to see their family and friends again you would have to create an entire cast of new characters and that is hard work and takes a lot of documentation. Other than my personal views on how this story will work I must admit that you make a very intimate and loving atmosphere involving Eva and Jordan and this is a wonderful thing to focus on. In future chapters try and insert some flirtatious dialogue between them during everyday events to make them seem more like a couple. Well there I did my review Flora I hope you take my opinions to heart and don't find anything offensive I hope your story progresses well like the ones I make.

ya i luved this show when it was on air..but now its not and it had quit a sad ending because I wanted EVA and JORDAN to be together but whtevr...luv ur story

I like it ^^
Is really cute!

DUDE WORK FASTER! MUST SEE NEXT CHAPTER!

love it

This is a very interesting twist:) At first I thought Jordan was going to become the avatar and Eva/Molly would just stay.. But you made them both avatars? That's a new one:) I'm really hoping for a new chapter very soon. I'd like to see Don Wei's reaction to it.. I guess he kinda knew that Molly/eva would become avatar since they left for the temple, but I guess he hasn't really let the whole thought gone into his soul yet. I'm hoping that after a little while(probably a year in the story) Jordan and Eva/Molly will meet up with Jordan's mother:) You have to update soon:) It's so many possibilities! :)

Pretty interesting, to say the least.

Proceed with this story, I would like to see where it ends at.

whoo... this is interesting... cant wait for more!

Loved the story. Can you make a new chapter? I love JxE pairings. Please! You reviewed mine, and now I'm review yours.