Not bad, although I don't think that they would have preformed the dementor's kiss on Malfoy, since that is saved for only the worst prisoners. Also, the final battle of Hogwarts took place in May of 1998, not 1997. Still, good job. Give Charles my regards.

Hello. I like this story very much.

So I want to translate it. May I?

In fact I wouldn't translate the part in which Draco died and entered the heaven. Here's a suggestion for you: actually you needn't write that part-it's kind of redundant.

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