BEAUTIFUL well written story here. Short and perfect. Thank you so much for writing this. I believe this is the best A/M story on this website. Great job! I wish you would write more!

commenting again on the Akihiko side of things. It... please don't take this offensively because I mean it in a sense of happiness and admiration, but it really reminds me of a Mitsuru/Akihiko rp my good friend and I are doing (which I'm currently comicking) and that thought probably gave me a million times more love for it than I would have had otherwise.

The little subtle romantic things like Akihiko's hand and Mitsuru's foot were adorable, and I think you kept them in-character (I've always thought Mitsuru had a coy side, as cool and calm as she normally is) but my favorite line was the last sentence because in my head I can hear Akihiko's "I've been waiting for this!"

Overall bravissimo. I don't know if you plan to continue it past here, but I think the dual chapters are incredible as they are. Thanks for continuing. ^^

I like this story ^^
Do you intend to do a suite ? (Akihiko feeling ?)

I live for these kind of stories. Well-written, good at capturing the essence of the characters... And I disagree that not a lot happened. Mitsuru's thoughts, that buildup... it all resolves itself very well.

And yet I want more! Because Mitsuru and Akihiko are beautiful together, and perfect for each other. Well done.

I love this fic! Despite not owning Persona 3 (I looked everything I could on youtube), I love Aki/Mitsu. There really should be more out there...

Sexual tension= pwn ftw! XD

Anyway, I hope you do write another chapter. I'll be looking forward to it!

Please write another chapter!! I'm begging you! I loved this a lot, it fit perfectly into the story line and was well written. I could see Mitsuru going through this, now i'm waiting for aki...

this was awesum DX i can't wait for the nxt one!!

Liked it a lot. Very enjoyable in the storytelling, plus who doesn't love the Aki/Mitsu pairing. Hope to read more!

yes, it good to see more akihiko/mitsuru fics there aren't enough out there! it was good to see more from mitsuru's perpective, i really loved this!

ooh and i loved the sound of the sequel!

Heh heh. My favourite pairing from the game ^^ (mainly because of the wonderful fanfics I've read about them, including yours)

It's nice to know that Mitsuru has a urge to roll her eyes now and then like a normal human being, even though unlike most people, she chooses not to do it.

I also liked the mentions of Shinjiro and Minato here, and how they both noticed Mitsuru and Akihiko's attraction to each other. ^^

I can see what you mean about not much happening here. But I think it's because you explored her thoughts about Akihiko into details, which believe me is a good thing. However, I wouldn't mind a sequel ^^

Nice! We so need more Aki/Mitsu fics. I do think that Mitsuru would have found herself attracted to the new Akihiko (after Shinji's death). Love that comment about Aki's space-efficient car... =P You should totally do another chapter in his POV.