Please continue this, I am quite enjoying it.

GASPETH! THE PIG KING HAS HIM!

D: I want you to continue please! ;_;

This chapter was nice! I loved how you made Tony so obnoxious, and annoying like he was in the game xD Some spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, but that's cool, my fic has a lot of mistakes as well.

Apparently you have something up your sleeves that has to do with Paula. What surprised me in this chapter was that she used pk life-up, which she never learns in earthbound, but its your fic, and I have yet to see what you have planned! Great job, and keep writing :D
The-EverLasting-Ash

This is an interesting story so far! The conversation was easy and logical to follow, I'll be sure to see what grand scheme you have planned! :D
The EverLasting Ash

'Eyes' lol.

Whut you doing to Ness, little bird? -pokes-
-finger is bitten-
AKJASDKJAF THAT HURTS. =(
well, I'll keep watching.

I like how this story is starting! I promise to keep an eye on it. It looks really interesting.

This looks interesting! I like the first chapter and the characterization in it, although it did seem a bit rushed. I can't wait to see where this is going, though. Keep writing~

You got the burglar thing from Chuggaconoroy, didn't you? Even though I've never played any of the Mother games, I'm reading this fic. So far you're doing a good job using Itoi's style of weird humor. Well, I guess I'll read the next chapter when it comes out!