Meh, I, actually, find this fanfic long time ago, but I didn't review cause that time, I didn't know what fanfiction is...

Sorry if I review just now...

But this story is great! I wonder why people missed it tough...

Please, update! I promise, I would be a faithful reader! Please! -insert a pair of super cute puppy god eyes here-

While I thought the concept was interesting, it was a little rough.

Somehow I didn't like the ending. The whole kissing scene seemed completely out of the blue. There was no build up of any relationship between the two. And why would Rukia care about someone who has been hunting her either? What happened to Renji and Rukia?

You also seem to be missing a lot of ending punctuations. There are also some strangely put together sentences as well.

Overall, it was a good effort.

Maybe someday you can come back to this story and continue it, it's really good. I love the plot, so if you can, someday, finish it all the way.