kiss him! kiss him! kiss him!

then again rather than smile i could imagine that wolfram will DEFINITELY blush...

your story has a very interesting plot! wolfram and yuuri are so cute together, aren't they? i know you might not have the intent of continuing this story or maybe you have already forgotten it, but i'm begging you! please end this story! they deserve a happy ending, don't you think?

Awww so sweet... i love your storyline... it's great! and your OC, Gabriel, i love him also.. he just sooo much like wolfram, stubborn head.. hahaha.. simple words and sentences and easy to understand.. please do updates.. even though you already leave this fiction for bout almost 2 years.. i'm waiting for your updates.. :D

ah! your soooo evil ending it just like that! please i implore you! post more soon!

Good story, please don't stop now

I really like the idea for this story and I hope you write some more of it soon.

A jealous Wolfram is always fun and I like the idea of Yuuri sticking up for him and thinking about Wolfram often when he's around his cousin.

I hope to read more from you soon :)

*squeals* w hey, this is a really interesting story! i never thought the idea of Wolfram being jealous would be so nice and gentle, yet harsh and strong at the same time really nice twist of the original character

plus, the addition of the OC being Wolfram's COUSIN? classic-ly nice... i'm just totally loving everything so far! especially your writing style (nice use of English by the way - like not too complicated words but good enough to properly describe the situations ) and the storyline! no wonder Yuuri needed his bike... XP

the storyline is really organised and well structured that you can't help but understand and enjoy so perfectly well

this is a really nice story and to have such a cliffhanger...? you absolutely MUST continue this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Oh, what a mean cliffhanger!

Anyway; I'm looking forward to the next update.

Great story! PLease update soon!

pleasee! update soon!

i'm going to get crazy!

i love wolfram...

and i don't know why i've fall in love with Gabriel...

xD (he's so cute!)

update!

Your story is well i think from what i watch in the anime,wolfram could be more jealous than that written in your 's a good story after for your next chapter

This is an epic story! I really like how possessive Wolfram gets over Yuuri. :D

uuri looked taken back, and turned a bright red. “What?”

“You heard me,” Wolfram said, rolling his eyes. “If you kiss me, I’ll smile for you.”

That was my favorite part! Go, Wolfram, Go! hehee. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

this story is getting really good and i cant wait for an update... u put a cliffhanger in. cant wait

update!

omg... way to cute! upload more!