 1eclecticreader 3/25/10 . chapter 1LOL! CK made the first move... and agressively, too. So the label coming from him first doesn't surprise me either. They're just great together. I love it! |
 KarlJozefOttoXV 10/24/08 . chapter 1Sounds just like the Lois we all know and love. Nice story. |
 theclexfactor 10/19/08 . chapter 1 I was recced this from a friend on LJ and she was absolutely right. Very rarely are there genuine gems on this site, but this is just so right and the voices were spot on and Clark's POV was just icing. Thank you for this. I hope to find more Clois fic from you. |
 Lara-Van 10/3/08 . chapter 1Aww... |
 ChamberlinofMusic 10/1/08 . chapter 1AW! I loved the Clois! I thought it was a great one-shot! |
 CindyB 10/1/08 . chapter 1That was wonderful. I loved it. |
 natalie 10/1/08 . chapter 1 aw! That was so cute. Very nice story. :) |
 Mentally Insane Fangirl 10/1/08 . chapter 1Awh! That was so cute. I love how Clark is just waiting for Lois to admit that she loves him too! |
 Crimson-Kiss17 10/1/08 . chapter 1Adorable! I hope you continue writing for this couple and perhaps conjuring up a new Chuck/Serena fic in the Gossip Girl fandom. We haven't heard from you in a while. Anyway, I'll stop moaning now and say how cute and sweet this little story was. Keep writing! |
 Dannie Tomlinson 9/30/08 . chapter 1Perfect Clois. Love it. |
 Spoons There Are 9/30/08 . chapter 1Awesome story!
I can definitley see Lois and Clarks relationship starting that way. Nicely done. |
 the'pretty-girl'wonder 9/30/08 . chapter 1Aww..to cute... And very true to Lois and Clark! Love it! |