aw. so cute. :D

on other news, if you watch the anime, is chrona alive?! D8

if you read the manga, does chrona every show up again? D8

please do not write a death fic. o_O

Yes it does make you go "aw". But Chrona is saved in the future so I don't despair too much. Also it's curious to note that Chrona was a girl in this one, rather in the other one Chrona was a boy. Do you prefer to think of them as a boy or a girl, or are you sort of ambiguous about it? Hmm, not much Ragnarok in this one... oh well can't have everything.

Semi-angsty, but a likely event in Chrona's past. You portayed it well so good job.

How about "BOOYAH"?

Great story! Excellent flow, everyone's quite in character, and it's an excellent concept. I wonder if the man had any indirect involvement with Medusa (i.e. sexual harassment, lol).

But anyway, I found it to be excellent. Please keep writing. ;)

- Aiiro Hoshi

aw thsi story was very huggable(even though it had the sad emo pity in it too.) I really liked it.^^ you captured chrona's personality very well.