Hi, 13figureskater-Draco'sgirl!

Wow! Good story! I like the description and imagery. I also like how you have included Shoba's memories of her grandmother and her grandmother's house in India and the game they would play. It transitions well into the game Shoba and Shukumar play.

So, what is Shoba's final decision? Does she leave or stay?

~drmcatcher

Wow, this was really fantastic. I love all the stories in this book and you really did justice to the characters. :) Have you read The Namesake? I'd love to see a fanfic on that too!