If only Atemu knew. If only Atemu knew. I guess Atemu's feelings for Yugi is in a way genuine. Not because of his looks or something. Ryou and Atemu are in denial. How cute. Great chapter as always.

This story will be longer than the rest, is it? I'm looking forward to the war! Please update soon!

Good chapter. I hope he continues to do so well.

hhee funny

such a filler chapter! update with action soon! (i'm just upset no Jou was in this. so mad) lol. i'm not really mad. just really want to read more from you. this was a very short chapter and i'm not thrilled about it. if you would update this asap it would be so wonderful. i'm excited for more. would you please update soon. no seriously. please. i want to read about odiji's return, and therefore the return of my Jou! yay! ok i'm waiting. for a longer chapter as well. that would be great. long and full of Jou. . . hmm. ok. i'll be waiting, review you later^_^

Wow 20 chapters and still no war. This story is really going all out. Seems Atemu might have a crush on Rasui. Too bad he doesn't realize that is Yugi.

nice lil message there hope Yugi gets it cause I do weapons of all kinds are extensions of you nd like you they will work according to how YOU wish them to in whatever way you wish them to then that upstart and his bastard idiot of a father can shut up about this arrogant scut he knows nothing of who he deals with and its gonna cost him to be sure well keep up the great work Darth gtg now JA NE

thanks good chap

please write more of this awesome story soon!

update soon!

please write more and poor Yugi not to have some one at leas like him unit he was 14 that he is supposed to marry...

please write more of this story soon its an awesome story!!

please update soon!

i realli wanna see atemu and yugi together!

abi

Good chapter. I think Odji's father has ulterior motives in all this. He is using his son. Yugi is amazing Atemu. This is great.

That is so not right! Atemu is King material. Odji and his father need to get a life and leave Atemu alone. I know Atemu will shape up and become a good king, once he gets his Yugi

good chap :)