Wow. Cool story. I liked it and you brought up a good point that doesn't even cross the minds of most fanfiction authors. It was really good.

Ooh, good idea for how they could have girl talk! I never considered speaking another language, but the Selkic tongue is even in canon, so nice work on fitting that all together.

I love how frustrated Dimo Nor was. It was almost endearingly Lilty of him.